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23 June 2005

كيف

True Faith at 8:51 pm, Poetry

إهطلي يا دموعي أمطارا 

و أغسلي قلبي المسكين

فقد أسقته كلمات الناس مرا …. أمرارا و أمرارا

وعجز لساني عن ردعهم فلا سلاح لديه

غير بكاء لا وجود له إلا في دنيا أحلامي

تهت و تاه الطريق و تاه مني تيهاني

أبكي؟ كيف … و لا بكاء لمن لا يعرف للبكاء طريق

أشكي؟ كيف … و لا شكوى لمن لا يملك لسانا طليق

26 Responses to “كيف”

  1. Hopeless Poet Says:

    Whenever I see someone posting Arabic poem, the first thing that comes to my mind is to translate it to English! But I am not gonna do that to this poem because I think it won’t be as expressive as this.
    You are good and I don’t know why you don’t write poems a lot :D
    And you don’t have to be sad to write :P

  2. Valiant Contender Says:

    encore!

  3. EsTeKaNa Says:

    حرري نفسك دعيها تبكي وتشكي
    الحزن منبع للابداع
    وها انتي تبدعين مرة أخرى
    مااااشاء الله:)

    ما تعرفين تبكين ولا تشكين؟
    انا اعرض خدماتي اعطيج دورة
    كيف تبكين كالطفل وتتشكين كالسيلانية؟
    :)يعني اخليج تصيرين مثلي
    امممممممم
    مجانا ترا:)

    ياسامعا لكل شكوى ويا مجيب لكل دعوى
    كوني مع الله وربي يشرح صدرج دوم:)

  4. The Don. Says:

    laih kida laih?? makonna kowaieseen ma3a the sweet story !! :(

  5. Vintage Says:

    tru faith.. what r u 12? snap out of it… ‘look who’s talking’…

    i went to the university last week for some scientific search… as i was walking, i saw an engineer who used to teach my friend, he had a burnt face.. el7amdililla 3ala kil 7al.. but his face looked like a black dog’s face… he walks with that face, sleeps with it, eats with it, conerses with it..can you imagine the agnoy seeing a new person looking at him every single day?..i thought of how u agonize every time someone spots ur speech problem… does that compare TF?

  6. True Faith Says:

    HP;

    :D Thank you.

    V.C;

    Encore; who me or you? And what is it that you encore or remember; or I?

    Messy comment; 9a7? :P

    Estekana;

    *Blushing cheeks*

    The Don;

    Welcome to my world of Ups and Downs; believe me it’s better than the Six Flags roller coasters :P

    Vintage;

    I have to express my feelings in away or another. I only have writing as away of expression.

    It wasn’t my speaking that I am complaining about; it was about some harsh words I heard yesterday; and the only thing I did is said “Sorry” with a silly smile on my face; Sorry for what? I don’t know. Because I couldn’t talk and defend my self.

  7. BLaSha Says:

    hey sweetie, what’s wrong??

  8. Q8Challenger Says:

    Hi, I Just Went Over The Poem Many Times But I Still Didn’t Figure Out Who Is “تيهاني” And Where And In Which Road You Lost Him? :P

  9. Anonymous Says:

    جففي دموعك و امسحي قلبك بهذا المنديل
    منديل عفواٍ…ليـــس له بالدنيا من مثيل
    واستغني بما قيل…إلى الله…به السبيل

  10. LiTTLE BiG Says:

    كيف ؟
    ;p

    Nice posT :) ))

  11. Anonymous Says:

    Cry, Cry, Cry, and let out those tears of sadness, helplessness and desperation…

    For soon these tears will be no more, No more, No More!

    You will only be left with tears of happiness, joy and triumph…

    wass

  12. Dolphy Says:

    let ur tears drop down .. LET IT wash ur eyes !!!

    don’t hold it with chains.. let it feel free !!

    you’ll see how simple was it .. it hurts YEAH bs nothing would be comforting as much as it is !!!

    btw : GREAT WORDS .. :) ) i like it

  13. *@@* nooni Says:

    shasawe feech

  14. Ra-1 Says:

    look at the great things u have and how many things Allah swt has given u and that made u better than others :)

  15. True Faith Says:

    Blasha; Nothing is wrong :)

    Q8challenger; :P

    Anon; Thank you :) Your comment was more than great.

    L.B.; :p

    Wass; I did cry; if that would satisfy you :)

    Dolphy; Glad that you liked it :)

    Nooni; Kill me :P

    Ra-1; I know, I know, still I need to express my feelings; and instead of telling me that go write your part three post; Lazy girl :P

  16. Ra-1 Says:

    TF … hahha tomorrow inshaAllah! let me enjoy my weekend :p

  17. Q8Challenger Says:

    Try This:
    1- Hold Your Tears.
    2- Mute Your Sound.
    3- Close Your eyes.
    4- Keep Saying “Bom ShakaLaka, Bom ShakaLaka” For About 1 Min.
    5- Open Your Eyes.
    6- Look To Your Self In A Mirror.
    7- Say “Booo” To Your Self 3 Times.

    Now Tells Me, Does It Worth It To Cry Or To Be Upset For Some Words ?

    If You Still Think The Opposite Then Its Not Weird Its Natural Because Your A Woman, And Woman Get Upset From The Words All The Time :P

    Beside That Trick Should Work Fine For Most People :)

  18. Valiant Contender Says:

    Hehe True, very messy :p But encore u! not me, I’ll just say bravo then :P

  19. ray Says:

    shloonich ilyoum ?

  20. True Faith Says:

    Ra-1; Tomorrow has came ;)

    Q8challenger; Why hold my tears if they are already aren’t coming down; I WANT TO CRY; It makes me feel better when I cry, holding them will make me in bad mood.

    Words could hurt males also not only females. And some words could kill you and tear your heart.

    BTW reading your comments made me laugh :) thank you :)

    V.C; thank you :) Glad that you liked it :)

    Ray; Calm and Happy; thank you sweetie for asking :*

  21. Q8Challenger Says:

    Let See…Ummmm
    “Hold You Tears”.. What Could That Mean !

    It Means That You Already Cried And You Still Crying And That’s Enough Because You Need To GO On With Live !!

    You Can’t Stop In Every Harsh Word And Cry…
    You Know, It Takes Some Of Your Life Credit…

    I Can’t Make It More Simple Than That Or I’ll Be Dead, I’am Not Allowed To Give Advices For Free :P

  22. True Faith Says:

    Q8challenger;

    I rarely cry; and when I cry believe me it’s for a good reason. I am the best in holding my tears and the worst in releasing them.

    And don’t worry I will pay you. Some day… and that day may never come :P

  23. Q8Challenger Says:

    I Can Bet That Day Won’t Come Because I’am No Longer Living ON Earth, I Just Went Back From Were I Came …To Heaven :D

  24. True Faith Says:

    Oh then we are neighbors because I live in Neverland :P

  25. iamnasra Says:

    Wow. I love poetry when its written in Arabic..I feel it is sooooo expressive ..

    And I wish I can write an arabic poetry…loved this one soo much

  26. True Faith Says:

    nasra;

    Thank you; I am really glad that you liked it :)

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