28 June 2005
The beauty of the sea
Through the beauty of the sea
On my boat and with my dreams
I will sail to Neverland
And on that day
When I step out of my boat
You will know that there is a Neverland
That will start on this land
If Neverland it is
The joy will fill my life
And no more of that
The holding tears in eyes
My heart will beat the names
And my ears will hear the sounds
Of all the things I like
Only in Neverland.
June 28th, 2005 at 11:42 am
;)
June 28th, 2005 at 1:52 pm
Ovelwhelming view .. best of luck .. 3ezmeny plz when u reach it
June 28th, 2005 at 1:56 pm
Take me with u
))
June 28th, 2005 at 2:47 pm
i’ll go to neverland….. actually i’ll go anyway away from here!
off topic: is it me, or is there something wrong with blogger? too slow!!!
June 28th, 2005 at 3:03 pm
bel Salama
Take Care
o have fun
..
etha 9ij betroo7een !
June 28th, 2005 at 3:11 pm
You all could join me if you want to
June 28th, 2005 at 3:21 pm
:)
June 28th, 2005 at 4:26 pm
This might sound odd but “Neverland” reminds me of three things; Peter Pan, Michael Jackson, and Metallica.. hmm, never mind that, I like your poem
June 28th, 2005 at 5:06 pm
nice
June 28th, 2005 at 5:50 pm
can i come with a purple t shirt
??:)
Enter Sandman, thats what vailent is talking about
June 28th, 2005 at 7:52 pm
You To Old To Go, So Stick To The Reality, That By The Time You Step Out Of Your Boat You Will Fell Down And Break Your Neck
June 28th, 2005 at 8:26 pm
Beautiful poem
June 29th, 2005 at 4:01 am
I liked your neverland philosophy
June 29th, 2005 at 8:39 am
V.C; Well peter pan is good; but not the rest :/
Glad that you liked it
Bo majed; Thank you
Q8ibloger; No; only blue is allowed :p
Q8challenger; “Reality” what does that mean?
Reema; Thank you and glad that you liked it
Ra7aal;
June 29th, 2005 at 3:33 pm
So we have a new poetess around
Different style than the way I like to write but I liked it. You have the wild imagination required to be a good poetess
June 29th, 2005 at 3:34 pm
HP;