Fluent Thoughts

Voicing my thoughts in a fluent manner

20 November 2005

Tearing nights

True Faith at 7:00 pm, Feelings

The sun came back, observing me, touching my face, feeling my tears.  

‘’What went wrong? You were okay when I left you last time, why is this sadness in you?'’

You left me with the night and its darkness
You left me to sense the loneliness in its shades
You left me alone to remember every bad memory in my life
You made my tears fall on my heart and burn my soul

‘’Dearest True Faith, I have sent my rays through the moon to reflect them on you; to shine your night, to clear your thoughts and bring good memories to you'’

I miss you dear sun
I miss the whiteness in your clouds
I miss your blue sky
I miss your morning breeze
I miss your singing birds
I miss your dew on my flowers

‘’Come to me, and live in my rays'’

12 Responses to “Tearing nights”

  1. Purgatory72 Says:

    7altech sa3ba :P

  2. '' Judy Abbott '' Says:

    Oh TF do you really want to live in those rays they will burn you!

  3. Reema Says:

    Love your writing it’s so deep.

  4. Ra-1 Says:

    sad post again!

  5. PhotoFlow Says:

    I’ve sent you an email.

  6. True Faith Says:

    Purgy و ما الحل يا حكيم؟

    Juddy Rays are where I was born :)

    Reema Thank you sweetie :) I am really glad that you do :)

    Ra-1 Not sad; it’s just that nights are getting longer and darker.

  7. Hope Says:

    The sun here is too hot. I cant wait till I get back to Kuwait. I love winters!

  8. the_northern_colour Says:

    Sad, Sad, Sad… & True Faith, don’t say no…

    The Wind, The Fog & The Snow.
    We are alone in this house…
    Don’t be afraid of a knock in the window,
    It’s the Northern Wind…
    We are in his palms.

    :(

    Who like depressions – welcome… rains without stopping are ready to help you…

    Under The Good Sun… it’s about you, True Faith…

  9. طائر بلا وطن Says:

    حلو وايد:)
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    و احساسج بالموجودات حلو و مرهف:)
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    take care:)

  10. True Faith Says:

    Hope Do you want to swap? :P

    T.N.C Under the good sun :) I love that :)

    طائر Thank you :)

  11. Hopeless Poet Says:

    May the sun in you always shine upon you!
    As for us, we need some time away from the sun :P

  12. PhotoFlow Says:

    Its lovely.

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