Fluent Thoughts

Voicing my thoughts in a fluent manner

25 March 2007

weary eyes

True Faith at 10:16 am, My life, Thoughts

She stands waiting for the green man to show, so she can cross the road; she looks up to the sun and it’s when the sun starts a conversation with her weary eyes.

The sun: “You have been watching the night more often these days?”
Her eyes: “Yes I just can’t close; her mind is disabling me to do”
The sun: “I wish I could shine at night for her but a control on that I haven’t got”
Her eyes: “She prays a lot to God, to able her to sleep in peace as before”
The sun: “I’ll pray for her as well; I’ll pray to see my reflection on her face again with every rising I do”
Her eyes: “Sorry but I have to inform her that the green man has arrived; see you later”
The sun: “Soon I hope”

6 Responses to “weary eyes”

  1. temetwir Says:

    very interesting way of explaining things

    wouldnt it be awesome if it was ‘made/translated’ into a poem in arabic??

  2. True Faith Says:

    Thank you Tem :)

    It would indeed, but I’m not sure if I’m able to do so; I will give it a try though :)

  3. طائر بلا وطن Says:

    اعجبتني جدا الفكرة
    :)

    and it seems that her mind is controled by her heart

    و سلسلة تمتد .. حتى المحال

  4. True Faith Says:

    Her heart is the thing that she knows nothing about, not even the reason why it exists !!

  5. طائر بلا وطن Says:

    أو ربما هي تعرف عنه كل شيء
    لكنها لا ترى تناسبه و هذا الزمن فأبعدته عن أهله خوفا عليه

    و لم يتوفر بعد الهواء الذي يستطيع أن يتنفسه

    حين نبض ستتذكر كلام الطائر و تبتسم :)

  6. True Faith Says:

    In a sunny day I hope ;)

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